During design class, we shared our cartoon which we made Pow Toon. Then with our group, we turned round and wrote the suggestions and cool things. Then, our group used this suggestions to make better for our cartoon. It was great to have time with this and it is really helpful to make better of our cartoon.
Here is a image that show you the suggestions and cool things that our class wrote for our group.
Well, for our critisms, there are some people who said to check grammar, maybe change little bit of characters, and change song. But there are also, that our group can not understand. Our group agreed with those suggestions. There are suggestions that we can not agree, we all agree the suggestions.
For me, criticising is not helpful for others because it might be hurt for other people.
But if the people give to somebody some suggestions, it might be helpful, but saying that someone is bad, it is not helpful. Also for me, criticising me is helpful if someone give me some suggestions. Well, my feelings hurt when someone say that I am bad...etc
Thank you and goodbye~
(Writing by Dawon OH)
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